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help me fix poem??

____I am......_____________<----- after I am is my name
the period of twilight
At periods I'm weird
At periods I'm a passionate lover
At periods I'm as pure as the color white
At periods I'm as greedy as the color green
At periods I'm like clay
a sticky ductile material
At periods I'm a classic Piscean
At periods I'm like a cuckoo clock
that strikes at random hours
At periods I'm as assertive as an atomic bomb
At periods I know my rights
and at other periods I don't
At periods I'm as zesty as an orange
But I know deep inside my consciousness
no matter what period of the day it is
I am the ultimate period of twilight

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help me make it flow better??

____I am......_____________<----- after I am is my name
the period of twilight
At periods I'm weird
At periods I'm a passionate lover
At periods I'm as pure as the color white
At periods I'm as greedy as the color green
At periods I'm like clay
a sticky ductile material
At periods I'm a classic Piscean
At periods I'm like a cuckoo clock
that strikes at random hours
At periods I'm as assertive as an atomic bomb
At periods I know my rights
and at other periods I don't
At periods I'm as zesty as an orange
But I know deep inside my consciousness
no matter what period of the day it is
I am the ultimate period of twilight

Vintage Lux Small Cuckoo Clock
Vintage Lux Small Cuckoo Clock
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Older German Cuckoo Clock  GG Berger
Older German Cuckoo Clock GG Berger
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Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Paypal   US $3.99
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
Paypal   US $119.99
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self poem???

I wrote a self-portrait poem but I need help tweeking it up. The first line I have written my first name and the second line period of twilight is the definition of my name. Anyways, I need help changing the first line, any ideas/suggestions? Instead of starting it off with my name I need something more creative.
Also, I need to make it flow a bit more so try to help me make it sound better and edidint help please??
Here is the poem:

____I am......_____________<----- after I am is my name
the period of twilight
At periods I'm weird
At periods I'm a passionate lover
At periods I'm as pure as the color white
At periods I'm as greedy as the color green
At periods I'm like clay
a sticky ductile material
At periods I'm a classic Piscean
At periods I'm like a cuckoo clock
that strikes at random hours
At periods I'm as assertive as an atomic bomb
At periods I know my rights
and at other periods I don't
At periods I'm as zesty as an orange
But I know deep inside my consciousness
no matter what period of the day it is
I am the ultimate period of twilight

Vintage Lux Small Cuckoo Clock
Vintage Lux Small Cuckoo Clock
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Older German Cuckoo Clock  GG Berger
Older German Cuckoo Clock GG Berger
Paypal   US $25.00
Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Paypal   US $3.99
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
Paypal   US $119.99
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self poem???

I wrote a self-portrait poem but I need help tweeking it up. The first line I have written my first name and the second line period of twilight is the definition of my name. Anyways, I need help changing the first line, any ideas/suggestions? Instead of starting it off with my name I need something more creative.
Also, I need to make it flow a bit more so try to help me make it sound better and edidint help please??

Here is the poem:

____I am......_____________<----- after I am is my name
the period of twilight
At periods I'm weird
At periods I'm a passionate lover
At periods I'm as pure as the color white
At periods I'm as greedy as the color green
At periods I'm like clay
a sticky ductile material
At periods I'm a classic piscean
At periods I'm like a cuckoo clock
that strikes at random hours
At periods I'm as assertive as an atomic bomb
At periods I know my rights
and at other periods I don't
At periods I'm as zesty as an orange
But I know deep inside my consciousness
no matter what period of the day it is
I am the ultimate period of twilight

Vintage Lux Small Cuckoo Clock
Vintage Lux Small Cuckoo Clock
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Older German Cuckoo Clock  GG Berger
Older German Cuckoo Clock GG Berger
Paypal   US $25.00
Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Paypal   US $3.99
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
Paypal   US $119.99
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what do you think of this poem??

my name is here
the period of twilight.
I am twilight, I am weird.
I am a lover, passionate.
I am pure, pure(another word) as white.
I am greedy as the color green.
I am clay, a sticky ductile material
I am a classic Piscean.
I am a cuckoo clock that strikes at random hours
I am as assertive as an atomic bomb
I know my rights and at other periods I don't.
I am as zesty as an orange but I know deep within the depths of my consciousness.
No matter what period of the day it is I am the ultimate period of twilight

help me out in anyway in fixing it

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Vintage Lux Small Cuckoo Clock
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Older German Cuckoo Clock  GG Berger
Older German Cuckoo Clock GG Berger
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Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Paypal   US $3.99
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
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My son is 6 1/2 weeks old. I have read that at this age he should be focusing on our faces and returning our smiles. He does focus on our faces for brief periods, and will occasionally flash a smile at us, but he seems to be more interested in inanimate objects. He loves to look out the windows at trees, and he is absolutely ENTHRALLED by our ceiling fans and cuckoo clock. It never fails -- if he's fussy, just hold him in front of the cuckoo clock and he'll smile at it like crazy. I don't know what's so amusing about clocks, fans, and trees, but my husband is concerned that it means something is wrong with him that's he's so much more interested in objects than people. What do you think?

Vintage Lux Small Cuckoo Clock
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Older German Cuckoo Clock  GG Berger
Older German Cuckoo Clock GG Berger
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Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Vintage Avon Cuckoo Clock Lapel Pin
Paypal   US $3.99
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
Our Christmas 2011 Cuckoo Clock
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