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self poem???

I wrote a self-portrait poem but I need help tweeking it up. The first line I have written my first name and the second line period of twilight is the definition of my name. Anyways, I need help changing the first line, any ideas/suggestions? Instead of starting it off with my name I need something more creative.
Also, I need to make it flow a bit more so try to help me make it sound better and edidint help please??
Here is the poem:

____I am......_____________<----- after I am is my name
the period of twilight
At periods I'm weird
At periods I'm a passionate lover
At periods I'm as pure as the color white
At periods I'm as greedy as the color green
At periods I'm like clay
a sticky ductile material
At periods I'm a classic Piscean
At periods I'm like a cuckoo clock
that strikes at random hours
At periods I'm as assertive as an atomic bomb
At periods I know my rights
and at other periods I don't
At periods I'm as zesty as an orange
But I know deep inside my consciousness
no matter what period of the day it is
I am the ultimate period of twilight

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self poem???

I wrote a self-portrait poem but I need help tweeking it up. The first line I have written my first name and the second line period of twilight is the definition of my name. Anyways, I need help changing the first line, any ideas/suggestions? Instead of starting it off with my name I need something more creative.
Also, I need to make it flow a bit more so try to help me make it sound better and edidint help please??

Here is the poem:

____I am......_____________<----- after I am is my name
the period of twilight
At periods I'm weird
At periods I'm a passionate lover
At periods I'm as pure as the color white
At periods I'm as greedy as the color green
At periods I'm like clay
a sticky ductile material
At periods I'm a classic piscean
At periods I'm like a cuckoo clock
that strikes at random hours
At periods I'm as assertive as an atomic bomb
At periods I know my rights
and at other periods I don't
At periods I'm as zesty as an orange
But I know deep inside my consciousness
no matter what period of the day it is
I am the ultimate period of twilight

Girl Swinging on Pendulum of Cuckoo Clock Holding Fig Pudding New Year 1913
Girl Swinging on Pendulum of Cuckoo Clock Holding Fig Pudding New Year 1913
Paypal   US $.35
WEST GERMAN CUCKOO CLOCK 1960’S FOR REPAIR X886
WEST GERMAN CUCKOO CLOCK 1960’S FOR REPAIR X886
Paypal   US $33.00
Vintage Small Carved Wood Girl German Cuckoo Clock
Vintage Small Carved Wood Girl German Cuckoo Clock
Paypal   US $15.50
Seven 8 Day Cuckoo Clock Chains
Seven 8 Day Cuckoo Clock Chains
Paypal   US $14.50
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